0You had me at “Hello”
But you kept me with goodbye,
You made me fall in love
when you looked into my eyes.
You swept me off my feet
no broom in sight
only an innocent heart
with intetions of “Wife”
So with out a question,
I gave you my attention
Forever in my heart
no bad intetions
i promised your life was mine
and you promised my life ws yours
i love you,
need i say more?
This poem was written/submitted by Cierra Carr.
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I think ur poem was amazing im a poet 2 but im not as NEARLY as good as you , i was wondering if u could give me some pointers, tips , and help on writting good poems. I’m still a rookie. LOVE ur poem tho.
Thank You very much:) umm. it just flows with me. I try tew See what i want to say before i say it. you kno invision the picture. then use simple rhyming words. but complex stanzas in between. leave them thinking. make it niversal not personal.